Question

10．近日，山东省"假疫苗"的案件再次牵动着全国亿万人的心．假如你是李华，你拟向学校英文报刊投稿，倡导同学们从现在做起，做一名有诚信的中学生．
内容包括：
1．诚信的重要性；
2．结合实际谈谈如何做一名诚信的中学生．
注意：
词数：100词左右．
开头已写好，不计入总词数．
Recently the illegal vaccine（疫苗） cases in Shandong Province have concerned billions of people in China．                                                   

Answer 1

分析 高分句型：
句型一：
A liar is always looked down upon①and regarded as②a black sheep③by the people around．
说谎的人总是被人瞧不起，被周围的人视为害群之马．
be looked down upon：被看不起；be regarded as：被认为是；被当做是；a black sheep：败类，害群之马；败家子；
句型二：
When sitting①an examination，we should finish the papers on our own without reference to others'
参加考试时，我们应该独立完成试卷，而不是参考别人的答案．
sitting为现在分词作时间状语，与其逻辑主语we之间是主动关系，表示正在进行的动作．
on one's own：独自地；独立地．

解答 Recently the illegal vaccine cases in Shandong Province have concerned billions of people in China．It is obvious that the vaccine dealers'endless pursuit of wealth at the cost of public health and honesty is to blame for it．This reminds me of the proverb：Honesty is the best policy．（结合实际问题，表明观点）
Never can we attach enough importance to honesty．If you are honest all the time，you'll be trusted and respected by others．A liar is always looked down upon and regarded as a black sheep by the people around．【高分句型一】Once you lie，people will never believe you even if you speak the truth．（诚信的重要性）
It is needless to say that honesty is essentially important to us students．What we do should agree with what we say．When sitting an examination，we should finish the papers on our own without reference to others'．In addition，our homework should be completed independently．（具体谈到如何做一名诚信的中学生）Dishonesty may bring benefits in the short run，but honesty will promise a bright future in the long term．（讲诚信的意义）

点评 提纲作文实际上是对考生的思路以及文章的写作范围给出了明确的限定，因此考生在写作时，应在保证内容要点齐全的同时进行合理而又紧扣主题的发挥；要根据提纲全面构思文章内容，根据内容构思词语和句型结构；注意句子的时态，注意词语的丰富和句型的多样性．