Question

【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。（10分）

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在下面写出修改后的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及修改均仅限一词。

2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Dear Sally,

Now I’d like to tell you something about my part-time job this summer vacation, of which I worked like a guide in a travel agency.The work was interesting but tired. I think it was helpful to work this holiday. It was the first time that I have earned money on my own.I’ve come to understand how hard my parents work to support for the family. I used to keep on ask them for money, but now I’ll never waste money and learn to share worry with my parent. I've learnt how to get along well with others.

What's worse, I've gained some working and social experience and I have learnt something can' t be learnt from textbooks. All these will be good for my future. In the word, I had the wonderful and valuable summer vacation.

Yours,

Li Bing

Answer 1

【答案】1. of which I worked like a guide... 将 of 改为 in。

2. of which I worked like a guide... 将 like 改为 as。

3. The work was interesting but tired.. 将 tired 改为 tiring。

4. It was the first time that I have earned money on my own. 将 have 改为 had。

5. support for the family. 把 for 去掉。

6. keep on ask them for money... 将 ask 改为 asking。

7. share worry with my parent. 将 parent 改为 parents。

8. What's worse... 将 worse 改为 more。

9. something can' t be learnt from... 在 something 和 can't 之间加 that。

10. In the word... 将 the 改为 a。

【解析】1.从句后面说的是“worked as a guide in a travel agency”，意思是我在一家旅行社作为一名导游。in which 相当于where ,修饰后面的a travel agency。故将of 改成in

2.这句话是说我作为一名导游在一家旅行社工作。work as作为固定搭配，意为“做……的工作”。故将like改为as

3.句子中的主语是“The work”，工作是物，形容词要用“令人……”，结合前面的interesting可以得知。这里应该是“令人疲惫的”。故填tiring

4.这句话是说这是我自己第一次挣到钱。由前面的was可以得知，整个句子都表示过去发生的事情，因此情态动词要用一般过去时态，故将have变为had

5.support直接与动词连用，后面不需要加任何介词。所以支撑家庭只需要用support 就可以了 故去掉for

6.“keep on”是“继续、保持”意思，keep on+doing sth.意为一直做某事，on是介词，后面是V-ing。故将ask改成asking

7.句意为与我的父母分享担忧。Parents作为父母的意思时，不可用单数形式。故将parent改为parents

8.what’s more作为一个固定搭配，意为“还有，就是”，符合句意

9.something不可与情态动词直接连接使用，要用that引导的从句，此时that指代前面的something

10.这句话意思是说总之我有一个很赞的暑假。In a word 是固定搭配，意为“总而言之”。故将the改为a