Question

【题目】假如你是李华，是一名高二学生。最近，你校广播站面向全体学生招募两名英语播音员。你很想尝试一下，请根据下面的要点写一封自荐信

内容要点如下：

1.自我介绍和写信的目的；

2.自身优势；

3.希望被录取。

注意：

1.词数100左右；。

2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3.开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数。

Dear Sir or Madam，

I am Li Hua.

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I am looking forward to your early reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am Li Hua. I am a student in Class1, Grade2. I have read the notice that our school radio station needs two English announcers, so I am writing to introduce myself.

First of all, I am greatly interested in broadcasting. I have received some professional training in my spare time, hoping that I can work as an announcer in the future. Now I would like to put what I have learned into practice and gain some experience. Besides, I am good at English, especially spoken English. I won the first prize in the English Speech Competition last year. So I think I am highly qualified for the job. If I am admitted, I will try my best to serve the students. I sincerely hope that you can give me a chance to work for the school radio station.

I am looking forward to your early reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：假如你是李华，是一名高二学生。最近，你校广播站面向全体学生招募两名英语播音员。你很想尝试一下，请根据下面的要点写一封自荐信。内容要点如下：1.自我介绍和写信的目的；2.自身优势；3.希望被录取。写作时不要逐句翻译，可适当增加细节以使行文连贯同时要把所提示的点写全，语句通顺，同时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词，同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。注意：1.词数100左右；。2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数。

【亮点说明】本文是一篇书信，采用三段式，要点齐全，布局合理，使用高级句子。I have read the notice that our school radio station needs two English announcers, so I am writing to introduce myself. That引导同位语从句，so是并列句的标志；I have received some professional training in my spare time, hoping that I can work as an announcer in the future.现在分词做伴随状态；I would like to put what I have learned into practice and gain some experience. what引导宾语从句；If I am admitted, I will try my best to serve the students条件状语从句运用巧妙；另外，First of all, Besides,的运用为文章增色添彩。