Question

【题目】假定你是李华，来自武汉光明中学。在新型冠状病毒肺炎疫情期间，你新西兰的笔友Andy通过组织募捐活动援助了你的城市，请你写封邮件表示感谢。内容包括：

1.表达感谢；

2.介绍情况；

3.你的期望。

注意词数100左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3.开头和结尾已'为你写好，不计入总词数。

参考词汇：新型冠状病毒肺炎COVID-19;疫情epidemic

Dear Andy，

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Best wishes to you.

Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Andy,

Glad to hear that you’re collected large sums of money for our city. I’m writing to extend our sincere gratitude for your genuine act of kindness. It is what many people like you have done that lets us feel we’re not alone. We can’t thank you too much!

Currently, everything is improving. China has taken a series of powerful measures to contain the spread of COVID-19 since its outbreak. The lockdown of our city is a most effective way and our citizens are going all out to do our parts. Touchingly, more and more volunteers are flooding in from across China to help us out.

Honestly, I'm praying that the epidemic will disappear soon and everything will return to normal. I believe so!

Best wishes to you!

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封感谢信，感谢你新西兰的笔友Andy通过组织募捐活动援助你的城市。

第一步：审题

体裁：应用文

时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时。

结构：总分法

总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。

要求：1.表达感谢

2.介绍情况

3.你的期望

第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）

sums of；take measures t；do one’ parts；flood in；help sb. out

第三步：连词成句

1. Glad to hear that you’re collected large sums of money for our city.

2. I’m writing to extend our sincere gratitude for your genuine act of kindness.

3. It is what many people like you have done that lets us feel we’re not alone.

4. We can’t thank you too much!

5. Currently, everything is improving.

6. China has taken a series of powerful measures to contain the spread of COVID-19 since its outbreak.

7. The lockdown of our city is a most effective way and our citizens are going all out to do our parts. 8. Touchingly, more and more volunteers are flooding in from across China to help us out.

9. Honestly, I'm praying that the epidemic will disappear soon and everything will return to normal. 10. I believe so!

11. Best wishes to you!

根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）

1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last

2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,

3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…

4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result

连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，

第五步：润色修改

范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多高级句式，如：It is what many people like you have done that lets us feel we’re not alone.这句话运用了强调句；使用了一些固定词组，如sums of；take measures t；do one’ parts；flood in；help sb. out等。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。