Question

  假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。

文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(A ) ，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\) 划掉。

修改:在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起) 不计分。

The pool was filled with child. I put on my bathing suit and tried to

swim. But after a minute I had to get out of. A hundred very small pair of legs and arms were splashing(濺起水花) all round me. I returned to a bank and looked out the ocean in peace. Ah,now this was really pleasant. Look at a large fish jumping in aii.i out of the waves，I wandered what kind it was. Suddenly,a strange bird fly over my head singing. What a unusual song it did!It sounded as “You there!You there!”

Answer 1

 The pool was filled with child . I put on my bathing suit

                          children

and tried to swim. But after a minute I had to get out of\. A hundred very small 

pair of  legs and arms were splashing(濺起水花)                                      pairs

all round me. I returned to a bank and looked out the ocean in 

                           the                 at

peace. Ah,now this was really pleasant. Look at a large fish

                                       Looking

jumping in and out of the waves,I wandered what kind it was.

                                  wondered

Suddenly,a strange bird fly over my head singing. What a  

                        flew                           an

unusual song it did!It sounded as “You there!You there!”

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