Question

【题目】假设你是李华，计划本周末和同学一起去河边植树。请给外教 Nancy 写一份邮件，邀请她一同前往。内容包括：
1).集合时间及地点；
2).活动安排及提醒；
3).午餐及返程时间。
注意：1).词数 100 左右；
2).可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Nancy,
Yours
Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Nancy,

My classmates and I intend to plant trees by the river this weekend. I am writing to invite you to go with us together.

According to our schedule, we will leaver from our school at 8 o'clock in the morning and return at around 4 o'clock in the afternoon. Considering that it is not far from our school, we decided to walk there. So you'd better wear a pair of comfortable shoes and bring some drinking water. By the way, we've already prepared enough tools, so there is no need for you to bring some. It would be better if you could bring some necessary tools.

After that, we want to have a picnic to relax ourselves. I really hope you can join us if it is convenient for you.

Yours

Li Hua

【解析】本文是提纲类作文，写作时，首先仔细阅读有关提示，弄清提供的所有信息，判断文章的人称和时态，应该用第一人称，时态用一般现在时。其次要明确要点：1.集合时间及地点；2.活动安排及提醒；3.午餐及返程时间。注意要在提纲的范围内进行分析，构思和想象，不要遗漏要点，要依据提示情景和语句，按照一定的逻辑来写，使用适当的过渡词增强文章的流畅性。最后注意要多使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点。