Question

【题目】书面表达

假如你是李丽，正在家乡的一所普通高中就读。最近你的叔叔给你来信，建议你到他所在城市的一所重点学校读书，并列举了那里的优势：环境优美，名师众多，教学设施先进，升学率高。请你写一封100词左右的回信表示感谢并说明拒绝去那里读书的理由。

注意：1．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

2．文章的开头和结尾已给出。

Dear Uncle，

I'm very glad to receive your letter and thank you very much for your loving care.

Best wishes!

Yours sincerely，

LiLi

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear uncle,

I’m very glad to receive your letter and thank you very much for your loving care. Maybe it would be beneficial to me if I studied at a key school in your city, But considering my personal things, I prefer to study at my present school, Although our school is located in the country side, its environment is very beautiful. Now, I’m getting or well with all my teacher s, who teach well and are very responsible.

I think whether a student studies well depends on the student himself or herself, not on the teachers. what’s more, in recent years our school has also been equipped with some modern teaching facilities ,which make our classes more interesting and lively, of course, if I went to your city to study, I might have more chances to go to university. However, I might also experience more stress, which would be harmful to my study.

Best wishes

Yours sincerely,

LiLi

【解析】

试题分析：本次作文要求根据假如你是李丽，正在家乡的一所普通高中就读。最近叔叔来信，建议你到他所在城市的一所重点学校读书，并列举了那里的优势：环境优美，名师众多，教学设施先进，升学率高。写一封100词左右的回信表示感谢并说明拒绝去那里读书的理由。要点包括：首先表示感谢；写明情况解释原因；表达祝愿。 故既要完成任务，又要兼顾形式的要求。

写作亮点：本篇条理清楚，要点全面，结构连贯。其句式上的变化既使得文章生动而流畅，也体现了作者驾驭句式的能力。例如：定语从句who teach well and are very responsible.which make our classes more interesting and lively.和 which would be harmful to my study.主语从句whether a student studies well.非谓语动词considering my personal things。句型it would be beneficial to me if…located, equipped with等词汇及what’s more, However等连接词。