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4．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
          2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
   When I look at this picture of myself．I realize of how fast time flies．I had grown
not only physically，and also mentally in the past few years．About one month after this photo
was took，I entered my second year of high school and become a new member of the school
music club．Around me in picture are the things they were very important in my life at that
time；car magazines and musical instruments．I enjoyed studying difference kinds of cars and
planes，playing pop music，and collecting the late music albums．This picture often brings
back to me many happy memories of your high school days．

Answer 1

分析 短文主要讲了作者通过一张照片回忆起了高中的许多美好时光．

解答 When I look at this picture of myself．I realize of how fast time flies．I had grown
                                                                                                          have
not only physically，and also mentally in the past few years．About one month after this photo
                                but
was took，I entered my second year of high school and become a new member of the school
      taken                                                                  became 
music club．Around me in∧picture are the things they were very important in my life at that
                                   this/the                         that/which
time，car magazines and musical instruments．I enjoyed studying difference kinds of cars and
                                                                                                different 
planes，playing pop music，and collecting the late music albums．This picture often brings
                                                                    latest
back to me many happy memories of your high school days．
                                                      my
1．of去掉，考查从句的用法，realize是及物动词后接宾语从句，因此不用of．
2．had改为have，考查时态，句中有时间状语 in the past few years，表示从过去到现在一直持续的状态，应使用现在完成时．
3．and改为but，考查固定搭配，not only…but also"不仅…，而且"．
4．took改为taken，考查被动语态，photo与take构成被动的关系，因此使用被动语态be done，take的过去分词是taken．
5．become改为became，考查谓语动词，and连接两个并列的谓语，前使用entered一般过去时，因此become也要改为一般过去时became．
6．in后加this/the，考查代词或者定冠词，根据语境指的是"在这张图片"，可以使用this或the．
7．they 改为that/which，考查定语从句的引导词，things作为先行词，引导定语从句可以使用that或者which．
8．difference改为different，考查形容词，此处应使用形容词修饰后面的名词kinds．
9．late改为latest，考查形容词的辨析，late"晚的"，latest"最新的"，根据语境是"最新的音乐唱片"．
10．your改为my，考查形容词性物主代词，联系上文语境可知此处指"我的高中时光"，应使用my．

点评 短文改错要具备两个基础，一是懂得分析句子结构，二是知道充当各个句子成分的词类或词性．并且注意人称代词，从句的引导词，名词单复数，和全文时态的理解，对于一些固定搭配，平时的学习中要多注意积累．