Question

绵阳拥挤的道路给人们带来不便，引发社会广泛热议。是否应该拥有私家车，有人赞成，有人反对。请你以Whether or not--Owning a private car为题，用英语论述人们的观点，并给出你自己的观点。

字数：120词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。

Whether or not--Owning a private car

Nowadays, masses of cars are crowded on the roads in Mianyang City, causing great inconvenience and a heated discussion. Different ideas vary from person to person.

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Answer 1

Whether or not--Owning a private car

Nowadays, masses of cars are crowded on the roads in Mianyang City, causing great inconvenience and a heated discussion. Different ideas vary from person to person.

Some people claim that there are many advantages of owning a private car. It gives a much greater degree of comfort. For example, they are no longer forced to rely on public transport. And with a car they can go where they like and enjoy themselves by making trips to the country or seaside on the weekends.

However, others strongly object to owning private cars. They maintain that as more and more cars run in the street, a large volume of poisonous gas has been given off, polluting the atmosphere and causing actual harm to the health of people. What’s more, in fact, private cars have contributed to a serious traffic problem.

Personally, I think private cars should be restricted rather than encouraged.

【解析】

试题分析：题目要求以“Whether or not--Owning a private car”为题，就是否应该拥有私家车，用英语论述人们的观点，并给出自己的观点。词数在120词左右，开头不计入总词数；不要出现标点和拼写错误，尽量保持卷面整洁、字体美观；注意行文的连贯性。

亮点说明：范文涵盖了所有的写作要点，进行了适当的拓展，并注意语句的连贯性；范文还使用了定语从句、状语从句、非谓语动词等语法知识，具备较强的语言运用能力。

语法方面：宾语从句①that there are many advantages of owning a private car，②that as more and more cars run in the street...；地点状语从句where they like；非谓语动词polluting the atmosphere and causing actual harm to the health of people等，语法知识运用娴熟，显示了较强的语法功底，也使作文句式变得多样；

篇章结构方面：范文注意使用and, however, what’s more, in fact, personally等词和短语来衔接句子和段落，使表达变得更有条理；

短语和搭配方面：范文使用了for example, no longer, rely on, enjoy oneself, make trips to, on the weekends, object to, give off, in fact, contribute to, rather than等短语和搭配，使作文的内容变得充实。

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