Question

8．请阅读下列文字及图表，并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章．
假设你参加所在年级的英文写作比赛，请按照要求完成一篇短文：
1．简要描述下图内容，并点明主题；
2．联系实际，表达该图带给你的启示．
注意：1．短文的标题已给出（不计词数）；
2．参考词汇：spoil宠坏；
3．词数150左右．

Answer 1

分析 本文为图画作文．
写作主题可以为：溺爱孩子
写作要点为：1，描述图画内容；2，分析原因；3，提供建议．

解答 One possible version
Too Much Care Spoils A Child
As is shown in the picture above，the blooming plant is being destroyed by overwatering．Often people do things with good intentions，but the result may be quite different．Such can also be the case with us while we grow up．
To spare us the kind of hardships they had in their childhood，our parents tend to offer us too much care，for example，making beds，washing clothes and even carrying school bags for us．They are doing all these without knowing that they are actually spoiling us．
As far as I am concerned，we children can't depend on our parents in everything，and at the same time our parents are supposed to let ourselves do whatever we can．As children，what we really need is to experience difficulties and take challenges so that we can learn from our own mistakes and grow to be independent．Only in this way can we become stronger to shoulder our due responsibilities．

点评 考生需根据图画信息，揭示图画中的道理，根据所提供信息提炼文章的写作主题，需了解写作要点及写作意图，仔细构思写作结构，平时注意积累词汇及语法知识．