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【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下短文。短文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

It isn't hard to grow up into a responsible member of the society.I can well remember an incident that happens on a rainy Sunday afternoon.I was on my way to a bookstore and was waiting for the green light at a crossing when a girl of about ten was knocked by a passing car,that drove off quickly.A man immediately rushed to the girl to give him first aid and I joined in with hesitation.Luckily,she was not bad injured and we send her to the nearest hospital. Comparing with the escaped driver,I am proud of what I did.As a member of the society,I am aware of that being responsible is that it takes to make a better society.

Answer 1

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【解析】发生在过去的事情，所以用一般过去时。

句意：就在那时，一个十岁的女孩被一辆过往的车撞倒了。Knock down是固定用法，意思是撞倒。

这里含有一个非限制性定语从句，关系词在从句中作主语，指物，所以用which。

句意：一位男子立即冲向这个女孩儿，给她急救。所以him改成her。

句意：我没有迟疑，也加入了急救。所以with改成without。

用副词修饰形容词。

发生在过去的事情，所以用一般过去时。

Compare与I之间是被动关系，所以用过去分词。

aware后面接从句，而aware of后面接成分，所以去掉of。

这里含有一个表语从句，引导词在从句中作宾语，所以用what。