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【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

A little kid fell into a lake while she was playing with her little friends.They were too frightening to know what to do next.Unfortunately,a pretty lady and a man passed by and saw the drowning girl.The man immediate dived into the water and took the girl to the bank and at a same time,the lady called the ambulance on time.Before the ambulance came,the lady,who proved to be a nurse,performing first aid to the kid.A few of minutes later,the kid sent to the nearest hospital and finally saved.The story is a good example where first aid can make a lot of differences.From it,we know it is necessary to know basic first aid skills so that we can be better preparing for an emergency.

Answer 1

【答案】

【解析】本文主要介绍一个小女孩在湖边玩耍时不慎掉入水中。幸运的是，碰巧一位女士和一位男士经过，男士救起女孩，并且女士给小孩做了急救措施，送到医院得救了。让我们懂得掌握一定的急救知识是非常那个有必要的。

frightened感到恐惧的，修饰人；frightening令人感到恐惧的，修饰事物。此处修饰they，故把frightening改为frightened.

根据上下句句意可知，正在她们感到恐惧的时候，一位女士和一位男士从此经过，这应该是幸运的事，故此处应该把Unfortunately改为Fortunately.

此处immediate修饰动词dive，根据副词修饰动词这一语法规则，故把immediate改为immediately.

at the same time是固定搭配，译为同时。故把a改为the.

此处表示女士及时地叫了救护车。on time按时，in time及时。故把on改为in.

本句中who proved to be a nurse是非限制性定语从句，perform是句子的谓语，根据文章语境应该用一般过去时。故此处把performing改为过去式performed.

a few一点儿，少许，直接修饰可数名词，故把of去掉。

此处表达孩子被送到最近的医院，主语the kid与谓语send之间是被动关系，结合语境可知谓语应该用was sent.故加上was.

make a difference是固定短语，译为“起作用”，但difference是不可数名词，故从此处把differences改为difference.

be prepared for是固定短语，译为“为…做好准备”，故把preparing改为prepared.