Question

6．假如你是李华，请给你的美国朋友Tom写一封信，告诉他你打算参加暑期夏令营，希望他一起参加，邮件的内容包括：
1．介绍训练营的相关内容（例如：时间，地点，参加者等）；
2．说明你打算参加的原因；
3．询问对方的意向．
注意：1．词数100左右；
2．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数．
Dear Tom，
I'm writing to tell you my exciting plan for the summer holiday．I want to join a Summer Camp．I wonder if you'd like to go with me．（高分句型一）
I want to tell you some details about the camp first．The camp will be held in my school next Saturday．And many other middle school students will take part in the camp as well．Therefore，we can communicate with each other very well．It offers teenagers like you and me a chance to enjoy sports and learn about Chinese culture．（高分句型二）If you are interested in it，let me know and I'll send you more information．（高分句型三）
Hope to meet you at the training camp this summer．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，根据提示信息假如你是李华，请给你的美国朋友Tom写一封信，告诉他你打算参加暑期夏令营，希望他一起参加，写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，要点包括：介绍训练营的相关内容（例如：时间，地点，参加者等）；说明你打算参加的原因；询问对方的意向．
2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：the summer holiday暑假；Chinese culture中国文化；be interested in对…感兴趣；the training camp 训练营；
I wonder if you'd like to go with me．（高分句型一）
It offers teenagers like you and me a chance to enjoy sports and learn about Chinese culture．（高分句型二）If you are interested in it，let me know and I'll send you more information．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Tom，
       I'm writing to tell you my exciting plan for the summer holiday．I want to join a Summer Camp．I wonder if you'd like to go with me．（高分句型一）
       I want to tell you some details about the camp first．The camp will be held in my school next Saturday．And many other middle school students will take part in the camp as well．Therefore，we can communicate with each other very well．It offers teenagers like you and me a chance to enjoy sports and learn about Chinese culture．（高分句型二）If you are interested in it，let me know and I'll send you more information．（高分句型三）
       Hope to meet you at the training camp this summer．
                                                                                           Yours，
                                                                                           Li Hua

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．