Question

【题目】假定你是李华，你的美国笔友Jack想了解你校的环境。请根据以下要点提示，用英语给他写一封电子邮件。内容包括：

1.学校绿化；

2.周围设施（商店、学校、医院等）。

注意：1. 词数100左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

参考词汇：公共设施：public facilities

Dear Jack,

_____________________________________________________________________________________________

____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】One possible version:

Dear Jack,

I’m glad you are interested in my school surroundings. I study in a beautiful school, where many trees, flowers and grasses are growing well. It seems that I study in a beautiful park. The best season is spring when many kinds of flowers bloom in turn. Everyone here is satisfied with the surroundings.

Besides, there are many public facilities around our school. A large park is nearby and several supermarkets are located within a short distance. There is also a hospital just a block away and other services such as banks and farmers’ markets, making our school life easy and comfortable.

How about yours? Looking forward to your reply!

【解析】本文属于提纲类作文，要求假定你是李华，你的美国笔友Jack想了解你校的环境。请根据以下要点提示，用英语给他写一封电子邮件。要注意电子邮件的格式和特殊用词。考虑用用一般现在时来写。要点：1.学校绿化； 2.周围设施（商店、学校、医院等）。

这篇文章对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，一定要契合给出的开头，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。

【亮点说明】本篇书面表达要点全面，结构紧凑，是一篇较好的范文。这篇短文使用了大量的短语，为文章增色不少，如: be interested in对……感兴趣，many kinds of许多种。还使用了非限制性定语从句I study in a beautiful school, where many trees, flowers and grasses are growing well.和定语从句The best season is spring when many kinds of flowers bloom in turn.等多种句式结构，增加了文章的可读性。