假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文.请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处错误.每句中最多有两处．错误涉及一个单词的增加.删除或修改．增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧).并在其下面写出该加的词．删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉．修改:在错的词下划一横线.并在该词下面写出修改后的词．注意:1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词,2� 题目和参考答案——青夏教育精英家教网—

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7．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处．错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：
1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
Some people are greedy，the other people are generous．Among my friends Susan never save money，while another friend of me，Mark，never spends a penny．Up to me I save some money for other month．But there are two things I never buy．One is popcorn，another is cigarettes．
I enjoy taste chocolates．That day I find those chocolates in that grocery were delicious，so I bought an unit of weight，a pound．After I left it，I suddenly felt that a pity to buy only one poud．Therefore I returned to it and gained another one with 98penny．Then I went back home with my favorite chocolates．

分析本文作者通过讲述自己买巧克力的过程，说明了自己的花钱方式．

解答 Some people are greedy，the other people are generous．Among my friends Susan
never save money，while another friend of me，Mark，never spends a penny．Up
to me I save some money for other month．But there are two things I never buy．
One is popcorn，another is cigarettes．
I enjoy taste chocolates．That day I find those chocolates in that grocery were delicious，
so I bought an unit of weight，a pound．After I left it，I suddenly felt that a pity to buy
only one poud．Therefore I returned to it and gained another one with 98penny．Then I
went back home with my favorite chocolates．
详解：
1．去掉other之前的the    考查固定搭配    Some…，other…；意为：一些…，另一些…；故应去掉other之前的the．
2．save改为saves     考查主谓一致    根据上下文都使用了一般现在时可知，此处描述的是Susan现在的状况，所以谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式；故用saves．
3．me改为mine     考查名词性的物主代词     此处用在介词of之后作宾语，指的是"我的"；故用mine．
4．other改为another     考查形容词    此处指的是：另外一个月；other意为：其他的；故用another．
5．another改为the other     考查不定代词    此处与上文的One相呼应，构成固定搭配One…，the other…"一个…，另外一个…"；故用the other．
6．taste改为tasty     考查形容词    此处用来修饰名词chocolates，故用形容词tasty．
7．find改为found    考查时态    根据时间状语"That day"可知，此处指的是"那天"发生的事情，应使用一般过去时；故用found．
8．an改为a     考查不定代词    此处用在名词unit之前，由于该名词首字母的发音为辅音/ju：/；故用不定冠词a．
9．that改为it    考查it作形式宾语    此处用来指代真正的宾语to buy only one poud；故用it．
10．penny改为pence/pennies   考查名词的单复数    由于penny是可数名词，此处指的是：98美分；故用复数名词pence/pennies．

点评短文改错是集语法知识与语言技能为一体的综合性试题，主要考查学生对词汇、语法和语篇三要素的把握能力．错误类型一般有：缺词、多词和错词．常见的错误有：1 词法错误，主要包括动词、名词、冠词、形容词、副词、代词和介词等词类误用、同义词混淆使用、固定搭配等方面．解答此类试题时，需要正确分析句子成分，熟练掌握各词类的用法以及掌握一些固定搭配等．2 常见句法错误．通常表现为简单句、复合句以及疑问句、祈使句、感叹句和强调句等错误．解答此类试题时，需要掌握各类句子的句式结构及意义用法．3 应在理解文章大意的前提下，进行作答．

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