Question

【题目】假如你是星光中学的学生李华，将参加主题为“My Chinese Dream”的英语演讲比赛，请撰写一篇演讲稿，主要内容包括：

1．梦想成为一名山村老师，帮助山村孩子；

2．山区偏僻，教育落后；

3．父母和朋友都反对；

4．我会……

注意：词数100左右。

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Answer 1

【答案】Good morning, everyone!

I'm Li Hua from Xingguang Middle School.The topic of my speech is“My Chinese Dream”．

As we know，the education of rural areas is falling behind other areas.And the children there are longing for knowledge.Therefore，the problem about the lack of teachers is especially serious. It puzzles me that my parents and friends aren't in favour of my idea of being a rural teacher.And they think I am foolish.I understand their thoughts and feelings，but I think the children in rural areas are in great need of me. I will study hard to go to college，thus realizing my dream.

I won't regret my choice.I will struggle for my dream.Come on and join me!

Thank you!

【解析】

本文是一篇提纲类书面表达，要求考生把自己当成星光中学的学生李华，将参加主题为“My Chinese Dream”的英语演讲比赛，撰写一篇与“中国梦”主题相关的演讲稿。全文以一般现在时和第一人称为主。

第1步：审题。根据提示可知本文要求考生把自己当成李华，撰写一篇与“中国梦”主题相关的演讲稿。全文以一般现在时和第一人称为主。

第2步：组织要点。1. 梦想成为一名山村老师，帮助山村孩子；2．山区偏僻，教育落后；3．父母和朋友都反对；4．我会坚持个人梦想，为山村孩子服务。

第3步：根据提示及关键词组进行遣词造句，关键词为：fall behind，long for，in favor of，in need of等，写作时注意演讲稿的格式和时态。

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。