Question

【题目】假定你是李华，你的美国笔友Tom在圣诞节期间要到曲阜游玩，同时约你一起去逛三孔（即孔府、孔庙和孔林）。请根据下列要点给他写封电子邮件。要点：

1. 表示欢迎 2. 接受邀请 3. 行程安排。

注意：词数100左右；

开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；

可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

孔府 the Confucius Mansion ; 孔庙 the Confucius Temple ;

孔林 the Confucius Cemetery .

Dear Tom ,

I’m more than glad to learn that you plan to come to Qufu for a visit this Christmas._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Looking forward to seeing you!

Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Tom,

I’m more than glad to learn that you plan to come to Qufu for a visit this Christmas. So first I will express a warm welcome to you.

As you know, Qufu is a beautiful city with a long history, and there are large numbers of places of interest in it, among which are the famous the Confucius Mansion, the Confucius Temple and the Confucius Cemetery. With the coming of the Christmas holiday, I have been expecting to see you.

We’ll visit the Confucius Mansion and the Confucius Temple on the first day, where we can take some pictures and buy some gifts. For the following days, we can pay a visit to the Confucius Cemetery by bus because it’s far away from the center of the city. At the same time, you can enjoy the delicious local food such as jiaozhi and smoked tofu and do some shopping. I wish you would have a good time in Qufu.

Looking forward to seeing you!

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】本文属于提纲类作文，要求假定你是李华，你的美国笔友Tom在圣诞节期间要到曲阜游玩，同时约你一起去逛三孔（即孔府、孔庙和孔林）。请根据下列要点给他写封电子邮件。要注意电子邮件的格式和特殊用词。考虑用一般现在时来写。内容：1. 表示欢迎 2. 接受邀请 3. 行程安排。这篇文章对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，一定要契合给出的开头，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。

【亮点说明】本篇书面表达要点全面，结构紧凑，是一篇较好的范文。这篇短文使用了大量的短语，为文章增色不少，如: pay a visit参观，At the same time同时。还使用了定语从句As you know, Qufu is a beautiful city with a long history, and there are large numbers of places of interest in it, among which are the famous the Confucius Mansion, the Confucius Temple and the Confucius Cemetery.和定语从句We’ll visit the Confucius Mansion and the Confucius Temple on the first day, where we can take some pictures and buy some gifts.等多种句式结构，增加了文章的可读性。