Question

12．假如你是李华，收到好友王林的来信，说他在英语学习上用功不少，但是效果不好，他想放弃英语学习．现在请你给王林写一封信，劝他不要放弃英语学习，并就如何学好英语给他提一些建议．
注意：1．词数100-120；
      2．可以适当增加细节，以使内容充实，行文连贯．

Answer 1

分析 本文针对收信人王林学习英语方面的困惑这个话题提出建议和忠告．第一段首先提出建议的原因（根据原文的要点）引入建议，第二段建议的具体内容．第三段写客气话．首尾呼应．注意时态常用一般现在时和一般将来时．考点：建议信的写作为本题主要考查点．点评：建议信是对收信人就某一问题提出建议和忠告．建议信有可能写给某个组织或机构，就改进其服务质量提出建议或忠告：也可能是写给个人，就其人生的某个重大决定提出自己的建议．内容要点：+写信的目的以及所谈事情的简介，包括背景、现状、存在的问题和可能的发展；+提出建议的原因；+建议的内容；+客气话或感谢注意事项：+语气要诚恳，有礼貌；+建议内容要具体；+可提供不止一个解决方案供选择或一个问题的不同方面提出建议．建议信开头常用句式和套话：I am writing in reply to…I would like to suggest that…You have asked me for some advice on how to improve…I will try to give some useful suggestions．I'm sorry to learn that…I'd like to give you my adviceon…建议信结尾常用句式和套话：I hope that my suggestions are helpful for your decision making anywaygood luck with your studies/work!

解答 Dear Wang Lin，
     I'm sorry to learn that you don't do well in English．I'd like to give you my advice on learning English．（书信开头）
     First of all you should be confident in yourself which is the first step in learning English well．（高分句型一）Secondly you'd better make friends with the students who are good at English and they are very likely to help you．（高分句型二）Thirdly learning English well is a long process．Remember：reward yourself when you have made progress which will inspire you greatly．（高分句型三）（提出建议）
     Anyway you mustn't give up learning English．Believe in yourself．Where there is a will there is a way．Hope my suggestions will work．（衷心希望）
                                                                                                                                                                                            Sincerely yours
                                                                                                                                                                                            Li Hua

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．