Question

【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）,并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Everyone has a dream. We are on the way to achieve it whether the way is smooth or toughly. As senior 2 student, I have the same dream as my classmates that I can be admitted to an ideal university. In the past 2 years, I have done everything I can to equip myself with that I have learnt from my teachers. Not only have I enjoyed the pleasures of study but also I have got closer to my dream. Anxiety and pressure did discourage from me at times. Besides, with the encouragement of my teachers and classmates, I think I’ll make it.

I’m sure that there has still a long way to go to achieve my dream. No matter how challenged it is, I’ll make it come true. As the proverb said,“Where there’s a will, there’s a way.”

Answer 1

【答案】【1】achieve 改为 achieving

【2】toughly改为 tough

【3】Senior前加 a

【4】that 改为 what

【5】anxious改为 anxiety

【6】去掉from

【7】Besides改为However

【8】has 改为is

【9】challenged 改为 challenging

【10】said 改为says

【解析】考查主谓一致。句中everyone作主语，谓语动词要用单数，故将have改为has。

考查冠词。句意表达的是泛指一名学生，要用冠词限定，故要添加不定冠词a。

考查名词。句中有three修饰，名词要用复数，故将year改为years。

考查连词。句中I have learnt from my teachers作介词with的宾语，是一个宾语从句；从句中learnt缺少宾语，且句意表达的是事情，要用连接代词what来构成。故将that改为what。

考查比较级。close的比较级是closer，不能加more，但可以加much来修饰比较级closer，故将more去掉或改为much。

考查动词。句中discourage是及物动词，不需要加介词，故将from去掉。

考查连词。句意表达的是转折，要用but来连接并列句。故将and改为but。

考查句型结构。题干是there be结构，表示某地有某物，不能个表示所属关系的have，has混用。故将has改为is。

考查连词。句中no matter加特殊疑问词连接让步状语从句，hard是形容词，要用how来修饰，what修饰名词。故将what改为how。

考查时态。句意表达的是客观事实，要用一般现在时态；主语是单数，谓语动词要用三单形式。故将said改为says。