Question

3．假定你是某中学的学生李华．请用英语给出版社会的编辑写封信，表达你对现在使用的英语材料的看法，内容主要包括：
优点：
1．话题广泛；    2图片丰富；    3有助于提高 学习兴趣．
建议：适当降低词汇难度．
注意：
词数100左右；
可以适当增加细节，以使用文连贯；
开头语已您写好，不讲总词数．
As a student reader，i am writing to talk about the English books published by your house．
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Answer 1

分析 这是一篇说明自己观点的写作，要点已给出，首先把要点翻译一下，然后用适当的连接词把它们组成篇章，也可以适当的添加一下内容，多使用自己熟悉的句型，而且句式要有变化，用词要准确，一定要注意整篇文章的连贯和语言的准确，使文章读起来不显得单调．在写作的过程中，要注意使用高级词汇，和合适的连接词如what's more，however，therefore等．同时可以穿插使用一些高级的句型，如强调句，状语从句等，可以让文章更上一个档次．写完后要反复仔细的阅读，修改一下不足之处．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：
One of them is that we can find a variety of topics，such as science，culture and history．（高分句型一）
What's more，along with the texts there are many beautiful and colorful pictures，which can help us understand English better．（高分句型二）
Even the students who used to dislike English have turned out to be interested in the subject．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Editor，
      As a student reader，I am writing to talk about the English textbooks published by your house．These books have many advantages．One of them is that we can find a variety of topics，such as science，culture and history．（高分句型一）These topics，I think，are very popular with us students．What's more，along with the texts there are many beautiful and colorful pictures，which can help us understand English better．（高分句型二）Even the students who used to dislike English have turned out to be interested in the subject．（高分句型三）However，some of the texts have too many new words and expressions which are hard for us．Therefore，I'd like to suggest changing them into easier ones．
                                                                                                                                                                                                           Best regards，
                                                                                                                                                                                                            Li Hua

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．