Question

【题目】假设你是李明，你的新西兰笔友Tom将于八月来四川旅游，特来信询问有关旅游景点的情况。请根据下表所提供的要点，写一封回信，并表示盼望他的到来。

旅游资源	许多世界著名的风景名胜，如：九寨沟(那里湖水清澈见底；色彩斑斓)，都江堰水利工程(2000多年历史；仍在发挥作用）
相关信息	气候适宜，交通方便

注意：1.词数100左右，信的格式及开头已为你写好(不计入总词数)。

2.可根据内容要点适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

3.参考词汇：省份—province；都江堰水利工程—Dujiangyan Irrigation Project九寨沟—Jiuzhaigou

Dear Tom,

I’m glad to hear that you’re coming to Sichuan in August.

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Yours sincerely,

Li Ming

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Tom,

I’m glad to hear that you’re coming to Sichuan in August. You’ve made the wise choice to travel here. Sichuan Province is rich in tourist attractions and you can enjoy many world — famous places of interest, such as Jiuzhaigou and Dujiangyan Irrigation Project.

Jiuzhaigou is well known for its beautiful lakes, of which the water is clear and looks colorful. It can excite visitors’ imagination. Another attraction is Dujiangyan Irrigation Project. It was built over 2000 years ago and is still playing an important part in irrigation today. Besides, the nice weather and convenient transportation here can make your trip more enjoyable. I’m sure you’ll have a good time.

I’m looking forward to your coming.

Yours sincerely,

Li Ming

【解析】试题分析：本篇书面表达要求给朋友回信。给来四川旅游的新西兰笔友Tom讲述一些有关旅游景点的情况。书信是同学们熟悉的写作体裁，这使得文章的写作更加容易。在写作前要确定文章的时态和人称，根据本文要求可以判断应该用一般现在时和第一人称。写作要点必须至少包括表格中包括的要点：1. 许多世界著名的风景名胜，如：九寨沟(那里湖水清澈见底；色彩斑斓)，都江堰水利工程(2000多年历史；仍在发挥作用）。 2. 气候适宜，交通方便。写作时可以适当增添细节，选择适当表示顺序的词来进行上下文的衔接，以增加文章的可读性和层次性。此外，还要尽量使用高级词汇和多种句式来提高文章档次。

【范文亮点】

Sichuan Province is rich in tourist attractions and you can enjoy many world — famous places of interest, such as Jiuzhaigou and Dujiangyan Irrigation Project.一句话明确说明了四川旅游景点，并列举了著名景点，言简意赅。

Jiuzhaigou is well known for its beautiful lakes, of which the water is clear and looks colorful.句子使用了介词+关系代词引导的定语从句。

Besides, the nice weather and convenient transportation here can make your trip more enjoyable.过渡词的使用增强了文章的连贯性。