Question

【题目】假设你叫李华，今年暑假要有一批来自英国的学生到你所在的学校参观并游览你所在的城市，现在学校需要一名英语导游，你打算应聘。请根据下列提示，给学校的领导写一封信，说说自己的情况。

1.爱好英语，口语熟练；

2.性格开朗，善于与人沟通；

3.本地人，熟悉所在城市的历史和文化。

注意：

1.词数100左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；

2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Sir/Madam,

My name is Li Hua.I hear that there will be a group of British students coming to our school during the summer vacation.

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Sir/Madam,

My name is Li Hua.I hear that there will be a group of British students coming to our school during the summer vacation.I'm writing this letter hoping to get the chance to be the guide.

First of all,I'm crazy about English and spend a lot of time on it.Therefore,it is easy for me to communicate with foreigners in English.Besides,I am an open-minded girl and fond of making friends.I believe these are some good qualities that a guide needs.Above all,being a native of the city,I know a lot about its history and culture.I will be able to make the journey an unforgettable memory for the British students.

If I am given the chance to be a guide,I will do everything I can to do it well.

Looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】试题分析：

本次作文要求写一封应聘信，要点如下：1.爱好英语，口语熟练；2.性格开朗，善于与人沟通；3.本地人，熟悉所在城市的历史和文化。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要富有变化。要注意书写，认真查验是否有漏写情况等。

写作亮点：本篇条理清楚，要点全面，结构连贯。其句式上的变化既使得文章生动而流畅，也体现了作者驾驭句式的能力。例如：文章运用了定语从句和be crazy about和a native of等词组。