Question

8．最近，你所在的学校就如何处理城镇垃圾向学生征文．请你以"Saving our city"为题，写一篇150词左右的短文．
提示：1．城镇垃圾的危害：污染环境，有害健康．
2．你所在的城镇是如何处理垃圾的：
a．垃圾分类    b．报纸、玻璃的再利用  c．填埋有害垃圾  d．处理废水、废气
3．自己应该做些什么：
a．尽我们的所能，爱护环境，保护环境  b．…
It's important to deal with the rubbish in cities．               

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇提纲类作文．根据题目要求可知用第一人称，时态用一般现在时态．内容分成三部分：一垃圾的危害；二所在城镇是如何处理垃圾的；三自己应该做的事．
1．The rest，which（引导定语从句，代指先行词The rest） is believed to be harmful，is sent to a certain place and buried．
那些被认为是有害的垃圾会被送到某个特别的地方掩埋．
2．Laws have been passed to protect the environment，so waste water should be  treated before it is poured into rivers．have been passed 是现在完成时态的被动语态，表示"已经被通过"； should be  treated 是情态动词的被动，表示"应该被处理"；is poured 是一般现在时态的被动语态，表示"被倾倒"
环保的法律已经被通过，因此废水在流入河流之前应该被处理．

解答 Saving Our City   
It is very important to deal with the rubbish in cities．Rubbish must be treated properly，otherwise it may cause problems．It may pollute the air and water．If people breathe the polluted air or drink the polluted water，they may get ill．（垃圾的危害）
Our city has begun to pay attention to the problem．For example，rubbish is sorted．Some rubbish，such as newspapers and glass，is recycled．The rest，which is believed to be harmful，is sent to a certain place and buried【高分句型一】．Laws have been passed to protect the environment，so waste water should be  treated before it is poured into rivers．【高分句型二】（所在城镇是如何处理垃圾的）
We've been trying，but there is still a long way to go．We should do our best to fight against pollution and protect our environment．At least，we should form the good habit of not throwing rubbish everywhere．（自己应该做）

点评 这是一篇表格类文章，内容已经给出，学生切入容易，话题贴近学生的生活，具有时代性，可写性，学生有话可说．要求学生写出垃圾的危害，处理的办法和可以采取的措施．要完全涵盖所给中文，采用高级词汇和多样句型，恰当使用连词，使文章连贯自然．