Question

【题目】阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。

World No. 2 tennis player Jelena first practised tennis when she was 9 years old. After six months, she played her first match, which was the national championship for kids up to 10 years old. She came to the semi-finals. When she was 11, she won a national championship for girls up to 12 years old.

To continue her career, she left her motherland and went to the United States. At that time, she couldn’t speak any English, and she was alone, so it was a hard lime.

However, it was a good learning experience for Jelena. “I did not know what to do at first. Then I tried to do everything on my own. When you are in difficulty, it makes you more independent and stronger.”

In the US, Jelena received better conditions for practice and development of her game. Soon, she became a professional and has been shining on the tennis court ever since.

“Your future depends on many things but mostly on you,” Jelena said when asked about her secret of success.

【写作内容】

(1)用约30个单词写出上文概要；

(2)用约120个单词阐述你对“Your future depends on yourself”的看法，并用23个理由或论据支持你的看法。

【写作要求】

(1)写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句；

(2)作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；

(3)不必写标题。

【评分标准】

内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。

Answer 1

【答案】One possibk version:

The story narrates the world-famous tennis player Jelena’s way to success. It describes the terrible difficulties she overcame by herself, which have made Jelena an independent, strong and successful player.

I can’t agree more with her view about the secret of success—Your future depends on many things but mostly on you. It’s true that our future is determined by many things, such as opportunities and help from others, but our own attitude, determination, and hard work play a more important role—In other words, we are the master of our own future.

As for my dream, I want to become a nurse. I’d like to have a future in nursing because babies are representing new ideas and hopes.

I know clearly that my way to success won’t be smooth, but before difficulties. I will follow Jelena’s example and never give up because I believe：My future depends on myself!

【解析】试题分析：本文是一篇任务型写作。共分两个任务：第一个任务用约30个单词写出上文的概要，注意完成第一任务时，要求简明扼要，概括性强，语言使用应简练、准确、到位，一定要说明什么人、做了什么事，结果怎么样；第二个任务用约120个单词阐述你对“Your future depends on yourself”的看法，并用23 个理由或论据支样你的看法。在第二个任务中，首先要表明该故事给你的启迪或其中的一个道理，之后用23 个理由或论据支样你的看法。本文应主要使用一般现在时态。写作过程中注意使用平时学到的短语和句型，注意行文的连贯和逻辑性。

【亮点说明】

本文符合写作要求，要点概括齐全，语言精练，文章布局合理，文中使用高级句子。It describes the terrible difficulties she overcame by herself. which have made Jelena an independent, strong and successful player,句中使用非限制性定语从句；It’s true that our future is determined by many things,it做形式主语，真正的主语是后面的主语从句；I’d like to have a future in nursing because babies are representing new ideas and hopes. Because引导原因状语从句；I know clearly that my way to success won’t be smooth, but before difficulties.句中that引导宾语从句。