Question

17．青少年研究专家Susan Beacham在自己的英文网站上开辟专栏，邀请大家分享心目中的"最
好礼物"．她认为，礼物贵在心意，应为之付出时间和精力．
假设你是李华，请用英文发帖，内容应包括：
●赞同Susan的看法
●你收到或送出的最好的物是什么
●该礼物的意义
●期待大家回复
注意：
（1）词数不少于80；
（2）符合语言规范；
（3）在答题卡上作答；
（4）开头已给出（不计入总词数）．
I am a high school student from China．

Answer 1

分析 本文为应用文---写一封跟帖，属于提纲作文．在写作时应使用第一人称，时态主要为一般现在时为主．重要短语：be for （赞成），lies in （在于），value（珍重），care about（关心），at a loss（茫然不知所措），recommend you to do（推荐某人做…..）．

解答 I am a high school student from China and I am quite for your opinion about best gifts．（赞同Susan的看法）The value of gifts lies in its intension so we should devote more to them..（该礼物的意义） The best gift I've ever received is a book from my English teacher，Debbie，which she brought to me when she returned from her holiday in USA．【高分句型】The book's name is Chicken Soup for the Teenage Soul：The Real Deal：Friends．I value this book because it shows me how to keep the balance of friendship in a positive way．【高分句型】And I must thank my favorite teacher for her care about me because she found me at a loss dealing with friends at one time．Reading it，I have been inspired and balanced myself in life and study．（你收到或送出的最好的物是什么）
I strongly recommend you to read it and share what you gain with me in your reply．（期待大家回复）                                              
 Yours ever，
Li Hua

点评 提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点，适当增加细节．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型．