Question

1．第二节书面表达（注意：在试题卷上作答无效）
假定你是李华，正在一所英国学校学习暑期课程，遇到一些困难，希望得到学校辅导
中心（Learning Center）的帮助．根据学校规定，你需书面预约，请按下列要点写一封信：
1．本人简介；
2．求助内容：
3．约定时间；
4．你的联系方式（Email：lihua@1236．com；Phone：12345678）．
注意：1．词数100左右：
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯：
3．结束语已为你写好．
Dear  Sir/Madam，
I'm Li Hua，a Chinese student taking summer courses in your university．I'm writing to ask for help．I came here last month and found my courses interesting．
But I have some difficulties with note-taking and I have no idea of how to use the library．I was told the Learning Center provides help for students and I'm anxious to get help from you．I have no lessons on Tuesday mornings and Friday afternoons．Please let me know which day is OK with you．You may e-mail or phone me．
Here are my e-mail address and phone number：Email：lihua@126．com； Phone：12345678．
Look forward to your reply．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本文是应用文，根据所给要点写一封信，希望得到学校辅导中心的帮助，写作要点：1．本人简介； 2．求助内容：3．约定时间； 4．联系方式．属提纲作文．在写作时人称以第一人称为主．时态以一般现在时和一般过去时为主．重要短语：take summer courses （上暑期课…），write to sb （写信给某人），ask for help（寻求帮助），have some difficulties with…（做…有困难），have no idea of （不知道），be anxious to do （渴望做），look forward to doing（期望做）．

解答 Dear Sir/Madam，
 I'm Li Hua，a Chinese student taking summer courses in your university．I'm writing to ask for help．I came here last month and found my courses interesting．（本人简介） But I have some difficulties with note-taking and I have no idea of how to use the library．【高分句型】（求助内容）I was told the Learning Center provides help for students and I'm anxious to get help from you．I have no lessons on Tuesday mornings and Friday afternoons．Please let me know which day is OK with you．【高分句型】You may e-mail or phone me．（约定时间） Here are my e-mail address and phone number：Email：lihua@126．com； Phone：12345678．（联系方式）
Look forward to your reply．
Yours，
 Li Hua

点评 提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型．