Question

人人都在渴望幸福，人人都在感受幸福。请用英语写一篇120词的短文，描述你体验幸福的一次经历，并谈谈你对幸福的理解。

注意： 1. 词数： 120左右 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

I still remember

 

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

I still remember the night when it was a cold , late afternoon and it was showering. Without an umbrella to shelter me from the heavy rain, I had to stand still and wait for my father. After seemingly long hours’ waiting, my father finally arrived. I was about to rush home when I found that my English teacher, Miss Wang was also waiting for the rain to stop. Without any hesitation, I went to her and gave my umbrella to her. Surprised but happy, she accepted it. Seeing Miss Wang walking in the rain with my umbrella, I smiled and a sense of happiness sprung up in my heart.

As a famous saying goes, happiness is only real when shared. As long as we are willing to share, we’ll find happiness everywhere.

【解析】

试题分析：本文要求围绕“幸福”这个话题写一篇短文。文章可分文两部分：一次自己的相关经历；自己的感想。注意故事的完整和生动，时态为一般过去时；第二部分感想不用过多描述，总结一下即可。

【亮点说明】文中使用了非常好的短语和句子为文章增色不少，比如was about to … when …，without any hesitation，a sense of happiness，spring up，As a famous saying goes，As long as；Surprised but happy, she accepted it.这句话运用了形容词作状语；Seeing Miss Wang walking in the rain with my umbrella, I smiled and a sense of happiness sprung up in my heart.这句话运用非谓语动词。并注意了句子的衔接如：when，as long as 等等。

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