Question

国际文化交流中心将于今年暑假在英国伦敦举办一个英语学习夏令营活动，要求报名者提交一份个人英文简历。假设你叫丽华，请根据以下信息写一份个人简历。
姓名：李华     性别：男    年龄： 18  学校：泉州阳光中学
性格：乐观开朗，善于与人交际，乐于助人
爱好与特长：音乐、摄影、上网、学习语言
入营目的：结交朋友，了解外国文化
注意：1.文章应包括以上要点，并可适当增加细节以使上下文连贯
2.词数120左右  3.参考词汇：泉州阳光中学 Quanzhou Sunny High School
I’mLiHua,_________________________________________________________
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Answer 1

I’m LiHua, a boy of 18, presently attending Quanzhou Sunny High School in Fujian, China. I’m always cheerful and easygoing. In fact, I’m communicative and enjoy talking with different people. Besides, I’m willing to do as much as I can to help those who need me. In my spare time, I’d like to listen to music, especially light music and English songs. And I’m interested in photography. Sometimes I will surf the internet, which I think is a good way to relax, as long as you’re not addicted to it. In addition, I also like to learn different languages. I’d like to join this English camp since I think it’s a good opportunity for me to make new friends with young people from all over the world. I believe I can learn a lot about foreign cultures.

试题分析：这是一篇要求写简历的作文，要点都已经给出.我们所要做的就是用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来.本作文中给出的要点比较简略,故需要自由发挥的地方较多.需要注意不要偏离文章中心.写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，一定要契合给出的开头结尾,不能出现文章脱节问题.尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更出众。
点评：本文属于说明信息类作文，动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。