Question

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处，每处仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

A survey basing on 1,000 students found that 80% of senior students sleep

less than nine hours every night. One main reason lies at students’ bad habits.

Too much homework is given by school teachers is another main cause. Some students

are absent-minded while doing their homework, and some wasting their after-class time.

The third cause is that some students have to get up earlier on weekday to get to school that was far away from home. Experts think an amount of homework for the students should be cut down. Beside, teachers should encourage their students make good use of their spare time. Only in this way can the students improve our study efficiency.

Answer 1

1.basing变为 based

2.at 变为in

3.is去掉

4.wasting变为 waste

5.weekday 变为weekdays

6.was 改为is

7.an改为the

8.beside变为besides

9.make前加to

10.our变为their

【解析】

1.小题1】“ 以. . .为基础”be based on something，去掉主语和be动词，过去分词作定语，因此basing变为 based。

2.小题2】“在于”lie in ，介词使用错误，因此at 变为in。

3.小题3】“太多的作业”后面的第一个be动词去掉，非谓语动词given作定语，表示老师布置的作业，因此is去掉。

4. waste。

5.小题5】工作日是好几天，因此用复数形式，weekday 变为weekdays。

6.小题6】时态错误，用一般现在时表示事实，was 改为is。

7.小题7】作业量，表示特指，用定冠词，an改为the 。

8.小题8】另外老师应该鼓励学生充分利用业余时间。而beside是指“旁边“，因此beside变为besides 。

9.小题9】“鼓励某人做某事”encourage somebody to do，因此make前加to 。

10.小题10】学生们高效提高他们的学业，代词our变为their。

考点：短文改错