Question

假设你是李华，暑假期间你们将组织由外国学生参加的中国城市多元文化之旅活动——“Discovering China”，你刚到北京的美国朋友Tom 来信询问活动有关事宜。请你根据以下要点，给他写一封回信：
1.活动目的：
2.日程安排：（1）时间：一周；（2）路线：昆明—井冈山—上海—苏杭；
3.发出邀请。
注意：
1.词数120—150；开头已经给出，不计入总词数。
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Tom,
From your letter I know it’s the first time for you to be in my country and you are eager to know what China is really like.                                                    
                                                                           

Answer 1

Dear Tom，
From your letter I know it's the first time for you to be in my country and you are eager to know what China is really like．I'm glad to tell you that an exploring trip titled" Discovering China" is to be organized in the summer vacation. I think it's a good chance for you to learn more about China．I hope you can experience Chinese culture in every aspect.
First, we'll fly to Kunming, a popular tourist destination for its beauty and mild temperature. Then We'll head for Jinggangshan, which is a former revolutionary base as well as a natural beauty spot．After a one-day visit there. we'll board a downstream ship on the Yangtze River to Shanghai, and meanwhile we can enjoy the great scenery alongside．A famous saying goes, "Just as there is paradise in heaven，there are Suzhou and Hangzhou on earth”，so a two-day visit to these two cities is a must．The whole trip will last a week．
I earnestly invite you to join us．
Best wishes!
Yours，
Li Hua

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点评：对于应用文写作是高考常考的文体，把握好各个应用文的写作格式也是平时学习过程中必须注意的，同时平时学习时多进行作文模板的记忆，万能句型的积累，高中作文写作，要注意在写作之前，首先对题目进行认真的审清，并在脑海中回想自己积累的哪些句式、句型、单词能用进来，这些单词、句型都应是经典的，不会错的。写的过程中，多注意灵活使用定语从句，包括非限制性定语从句。要熟悉英美人写文章的习惯，遇到专有地名、人名一定要用非限制性定语从句，强调唯一性。平时的英语作文就可以多尝试使用这些表达，考试时才能游刃有余，胸有成竹。