Question

假设你是新华中学的学生李华，不久前在学校举办的英语竞赛中获得一等奖。校报请你写一篇稿件刊登在英文版面上，介绍你课外学习英语的经验。请根据以下提示用英语写一篇短文：
1.参加英语角的益处；
2.坚持写英语日记的作用；
3.英文阅读网站（Enjoy Reading）对你的帮助。
注意：1. 词数：120-150；
2. 可适当增加细节， 以使行文连贯。
                                                                    
                                                                    
                                                                    
                                                                    
                                                                

Answer 1

My experience of learning English after class
I'm glad i have won the first prize in the English Contest, which completely contributes to my after-class English learning.
I often take part in the English Corner and practice speaking English. There are many participants in the corner and we can talk about any topics in English. By doing this, I have improved my pronunciation and intonation. Most important of all, I have conquered my shyness and timidness. I can talk to anybody boldly in English. So I didn't feel nervous in the contest at all.
At the same time I insist on keeping diaries in English every day. I will try my best to bring what I have learnt to use. Thus my knowledge has been reviewed and enlarged.
I also visit English reading websites to read much. Learning English depends on reading widely and largely. Those sites provide many English articles of all levels and I can find appropriate ones to read. The dictionary in the computer can help me deal with the new vocabulary quickly. Therefore I benefit much from the reading.
Above are my three main learning methods of learning English after class. They are helpful and convenient to me. I hope they are also beneficial for you.

解析试题分析：这是一篇提纲类作文，要求介绍你课外学习英语的经验。我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来.本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。象范文的I will try my best to bring what I have learnt to use.就是用了what连接的宾语从句。
考点：提纲类作文
点评：本文属于提纲类作文，动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。