Question

20．下个月校报编辑部将为同学们开设"Say you，say me"专栏．现在请你根据以下提示内容写一篇短文，向校报投稿．
1）给你留下印象最深的同学是谁？
2）他（她）做了什么事情让你印象深刻？
3）你从此事中悟到了什么？
注意：
1．可以叙述自己亲身的经历或虚构的故事；
2．文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；
3．词数120左右．可适当发挥，以使行文连贯．
I'd like to say something about         ．

Answer 1

分析 本文为投稿文．
写作要点为：1）给你留下印象最深的同学是谁？
2）他（她）做了什么事情让你印象深刻？
3）你从此事中悟到了什么？

解答 I'd like to say something about my best friend Lily，who is optimistic and crazy about flowers．Last term there was a potted plant in our classroom．Every morning，the first thing Lily would do was walk to the plant to see whether everything was all right．Then she watered it and enjoyed its loveliness．When asked why，she answered that because the plant needed her praise．With the daily praises and tender loving care the plant bloomed at last．So did Lily's face．The flowers brought Lily satisfaction because of the wonders of their beauty，and she conveyed the happiness to all of us．With a kind and rosy heart，Lily makes everyone around her comfortable．
    The plants need our admiration just as we need others'support．Thus，we can lead a blessed life．Everyone welcomes love，like a flower welcomes the sunshine．

点评 考生需了解写作要点及写作意图，仔细构思写作结构，平时注意积累词汇及语法知识．