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【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Consider how your first reaction is when you see a dwarf(侏儒) walking along the street. Do you think of him like an equal? Probable no. To the world, he is an "abnormal creature" belonged to a minority of people that include those who can't see, talk or hear. It may seem that they are born to be gossiped about and glare at. Always citizens are educated to take care and show respect for handicapped people. From the bottom of our hearts, do we sincerely treat they equally? Why do we still laugh when we watch unusually short clown in a circus show? The only reason is that, to us, they are funny and amusing. Then, we realize that the only result of education is that we learn it to hide our curiosity and our impolite towards those people.

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】how→what

【2】like→as

【3】Probable→Probably

【4】belonged→belonging

【5】glare→glared

【6】care后加of

【7】they→them

【8】watch后加an或clown改为clowns

【9】删去it

【10】impolite→impoliteness

【解析】

试题分析：本文讲述了很多人只是掩饰了对残疾人的好奇和不礼貌行为，而不是用正常的心态去看待残疾人。

【1】how→what 句意：想一下当你看到侏儒在大街上行走你的第一反应是什么。consider后面的宾语从句缺少引导词，并且引导词在从句中表语，根据句意，故把how改为 what。

【2】like→as 固定搭配：think of...as...把……看作……，故把like改为as。

【3】Probable→Probably 此处no是副词，副词修饰副词，故把Probable改为Probably。

【4】belonged→belonging belong to属于，无被动语态，此处是现在分词作后置定语，故把belonged改为belonging。

【5】glare→glared and表示并列，所以glare和gossiped是并列动词，都用过去分词，故把glare改为glared。

【6】care后加of 句意：人们总是被教育照顾和尊敬残疾人。固定短语：take care of照顾，故在care后加of。

【7】they→them 动词后面用人称代词宾格，故把they改为them。

【8】watch后加an或clown改为clowns clown是可数名词，故在watch后加an或clown改为clowns。

【9】删去it 此处动词不定式是learn的宾语，故删去it。

【10】impolite→impoliteness our是形容词性物主代词，修饰名词，故把impolite改为impoliteness。

【知识拓展】

以e结尾的形容词变成副词时，有的直接加ly ;有的把e去掉再加ly.

possible---possibly； simple---simply; gentle---gently; terrible---terribly; true---truly; flexible---flexibly

immediate--- immediately; brave---bravely; wise---wisely；active---actively

【3】Probable改为Probably 此处no是副词，副词修饰副词，故把Probable改为Probably。