Question

【题目】

【写作内容】

目前，学校存在少数学生作弊的现象。某英文杂志社拟对此现象向中学生征文，标题是“My Opinion on Cheating in Examinations.”请根据下列提示用英语写一篇英文稿。

内容要点如下：

【写作要求】

只能使用5个句子表达全部内容。

【评分标准】

句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。

Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version:

Though it is a pity, we’ve to regretfully admit that now a few students like cheating when they’re having exams at school & I think there are some reasons for them to do so. However, the most possible ones may go like this: there are too many exams which are too difficult but some of the students are often lazy and don’t work hard at their lessons. So when taking exams, they sometimes cheat in order to get better results to please their parents and teachers.

In my opinion, it is wrong to cheat in exams because it breaks the rules of schools & and we students should be honest and try to get good results by studying hard instead of cheating in exams. What's more, we should improve our study methods and get well prepared for exams.

【解析】

试题分析：本次作文为提纲作文。写作对象：考试中的作弊现象，贴近学生生活，且写作要点要求具体，考生应是有话可说。因为所写为目前存在形象，所以本文的基本时态应为一般现在时。另外，要注意表述的条理性。

写作亮点：该篇范文，要点全面，采用两段式，层次感强且做到了主次分明。此外，该篇文章用语恰当（例如：“Though it is a pity, we’ve to regretfully admit that…”）。更难能可贵的是，其连接性词/短语的合理使用（例如：“However, In my opinion, What's more,”）及句式的恰到好处的转换（例如：定语从句“there are too many exams which are too difficult”，省略句“So when taking exams, they sometimes cheat”）使得文章连贯而自然，实为考场中的上乘之作。