Question

【题目】假如英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文。文中共有10 处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号Λ，并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线\划掉。

修改:在错词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2、只允许修改10处，多者从第11处不计。

My favorite cartoon character is "Doraemon" creating by Japanese manga artist Fujiko F. Fujio.He was official given life in a factory on September 3, 2112. In the cartoon, Doraemon traveled back in time from the 22nd century help the character Nobita Nobi. She is famous for the tools that come out of a fourth-dimension pocket on his stomach, and one of his most famous tool is "anywhere door" what allows people to travel anywhere they wish. After the cartoon debuted in December, 1969, Doreamon gained great popular rapidly. Now, he is also considered as the icon of Japanese culture both in home and abroad. In 2008, Japanese government appoints Doraemon as "anime ambassador" in the order to promoting Japanese animated cartoons.

Answer 1

【答案】1. creating→ created

2. official→officially

3.help前加to

4. She→He

5. tool→ tools

6. what→ that/which

7. popular→ popularity

8. in→at

9. appoints→appointed

10.去掉the

【解析】

这是一篇说明文，短文介绍了作者最喜欢的卡通人物“哆啦A梦”。

第一处：考查过去分词。 "Doraemon" 与create在逻辑上是被动关系，所以用过去分词作后置定语。故将 creating改成 created。

第二处：考查副词。 officially为副词修饰动词given。 故将official改成 officially。

第三处：考查动词不定式。分析句子可知，本句为动词不定式作目的状语从句。故将help前加to。

第四处：考查代词。分析句子可知，本句的主语仍然是“哆啦A梦”。故将She改成He。

第五处：考查名词复数。 one of后接名词复数。故将tool改成 tools。

第六处：考查关系代词。分析句子可知，"anywhere door”为先行词，作后面定语从句的主语，所以关系代词为 that/which。故将what改成 that/which。

第七处：考查名词。 gain后接名词popularity作宾语。故将 popular改成 popularity。

第八处：考查介词。 at home and abroad“在国内外”为固定短语。故将in改成at。

第九处：考查一般过去时。由“In 2008”可知，本句为一般过去时。故将appoints改成 appointed。

第十处：考查固定短语。 in order to do sth“为了做某事”为固定短语。故去掉the。