Question

【题目】假如你叫李华，你的美国网友Jack通过Email询问你的暑假安排。请根据下面的网站广告，选择参加其中一项活动并说明理由。

UNIUE SUMMRCAMPS

Check out these camps．They are really unique!

●Rock-Music Camp

●Military Summer Camp

●Science Camp for Students

●Volunteering in Another Country

注意：1．词数100 左右；

2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Jack．

Now I’d like to share my plan for the summer holiday．

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Yours，

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Jack,

Now I’d like to share my own plan for the summer holiday.

Recently I’ve become interested in some attractive camps advertised in a website and have made up my mind to take part in one of them: Volunteering in Another Country. I have always dreamed of being a volunteer, because I’d like to offer necessary help to those who need it. Besides, volunteering in another country will give me a good chance to experience a completely different culture. Most importantly, I can exchange ideas with the local people and get them to know more about China.

So I’m eager to join in the activity and I’m sure I will benefit greatly from the opportunity. How about your plan for this summer?

Yours，

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇应用文写作。主要内容是向美国网友Jack介绍自己的安排，作者想通过写邮件来详细解释自己暑期参加夏令营的一些情况，比如说有不同的夏令营主题。写作过程中要注意书信的格式以及书面用语。图表中列出的问题不能遗漏。

【亮点说明】第一段首先描述了写信的目的，简单介绍自己想分享暑期的安排。第二段作者介绍了自己想去别的国家当志愿者的安排，并解释了自己的理由。写作中用到了fi besides; more importantly 这些逻辑词，使文章逻辑清晰，表达通顺，衔接紧密，最后一句询问网友的安排及自己的期盼之情。整篇文章语言言简意赅，感情真挚，所有要点都没有遗漏。文章连贯通顺。