Question

19．随着天气变冷，火灾频发，给人民的生命财产安全造成巨大损失．请你以校学生会（the Students'Union）的名义，给全校同学写一封信，主要内容应包括：
1．火灾带来的危害和预防火灾的重要性
2．你的建议 （学习必要的防火知识；制定班级防火安全条例；保持逃生通道畅通；不要玩火等）
语言点提示：
fire safety regulations防火安全条例；
take precautions采取预防措施；
fire extinguisher灭火器
（注意：短文中不得出现考生姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分．）

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇提纲作文，让我们以校学生会（the Students'Union）的名义，给全校同学写一封关于火灾的信，这需要我们发挥英语思维，将提供的信息用英语完整流畅的表达出来．写作需要用第一人称，时态主要是一般现在时，内容要点包括：火灾带来的危害和预防火灾的重要性，你的建议．我们此篇作文分为两部分，第一部分为火灾带来的危害和预防火灾的重要性．第二部分为建议 （学习必要的防火知识；制定班级防火安全条例；保持逃生通道畅通；不要玩火等）．
重点短语与句型：
public security公共安全
in case  以防万一
on account of因为，由于
appeal to呼吁
urge sb not to do sth 敦促某人不做某事
for the sake of  为了…起见，因为…缘故
bear…in mind 牢记…
高分句型一：With winter approaching，it's getting cold and dry and fires are more likely to break out此句为with复合结构
高分句型二：．It's of great importance to be aware of the potential danger．此句be+of+n可换为be+adj．

解答 With winter approaching，it's getting cold and dry and fires are more likely to break out 高分句型．It's of great importance to be aware of the potential danger．On Nov 15，2010，dozens of people were killed or injured in a fire in Shanghai，which has been the most severe accident concerning public security in our city in recent years，Fires occur frequently every year in our country and cause huge casudties and dramatic losses，As a result，fire has been listed one of the top killers in China．As heavily populated public areas，schools are more mlnerable to fires so it's especially vital for everyone，teacher or student，to improve your awareness of fire prevention in case all of us are threatened with flames．（火灾带来的危害和预防火灾的重要性）
On account of the severe fact，we appeal to every class to make fire satety  regulations，which will be an important factor in routime class examination．The student's union is going toorganize drills for excuvation in the near future．Officers from the fire department are due to come to our school next week to teach necessary knowledge and skills．In fire prevention，induding manipulating fire extinguishers．We urge every student not to play with fire and be sure to take care when you are working with fire．The current situation calls for the efforts made by each individual．For the sake of yourself and others，please bear all the things above in mind and remember that this is not a joke as it involves the safety and interests of all the people．If you have any problem，please contact the student's Union．（ 建议：学习必要的防火知识；制定班级防火安全条例；保持逃生通道畅通；不要玩火等）

点评 且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实 的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧