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　　你校为推进素质教育，进行了教学“减负”活动．假如你是学校学生会的学习部长，对“减负”前后的情况进行了调查，调查情况如下图，请根据此图写成一篇文章发表在校报上．

　　注意：①短文必须包括图表内容．

　　　　　②可适当增加评注性语言．

　　　　　③词数为120左右．

　　　　　④文章的第一段已经给出．

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One possible version 　　Recently I've made a survey about the “Reducing Burden” activity being carried in our school. 　　We middle school students used to be heavily burdened with all kinds of homework. We spent more than 6 hours in the classroom. At home, we still had to spend over 3 hours on our homework. So we had less than 7 hours to sleep. Besides, we had only about three hours' free time. As a result, our health was badly damaged. 　　Now things are getting better thanks to the activity. We can only spent about five hours in the classroom and hours for homework are shortened to about two hours so that we have two more hours to sleep and also two more hours for free time. 　　So I think this activity benefits not only our health but also our study. 　　写作步骤 　　(1)材料分析 　　文体：说明文 　　时态：一般过去时和一般现在时 　　人称：第一人称复数 　　(2)分析要点 　　①有关何事的调查 　　②“减负”前后各种时间的变化 　　③适当评议 　　(3)提纲要领 　　Recently, I've made a survey of… 　　We used to spend... in, we had only…hours to do…, 　　As a result, …/ Therefore, … 　　Now, things have changed…because of…, 　　The hours spent in... has been shortened / reduced to…, 　　We now can have…hours to… 　　It does good to…, It helps to improve….It benefits…