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2．假如你是李华．最近，你在网上看到了你的英国好友Mike给你发来的帖子，诉说自己在考试前总是感到很紧张，身心健康也受到了影响，为此很苦恼．请你给他回帖，提出一些建议．
内容要点：
1．心态良好，睡眠充足；
2．均衡饮食，积极运动；
3．其它建议（至少两条）．
注意：
1．字数：110左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
3．信的开头和结尾己给出，不计入总词数．
Dear Mike，
As is well-known to all，physical and mental health is of great significance to success in exams．Therefore，I'd like to offer you some practical tips on it．
Firstly，make it a rule to go to bed early and get up early to get enough sleep．（高分句型一）Secondly，keep a balanced diet and not eat junk food．Thirdly，take more exercise to keep fit．Taking exercise can also make you full of energy．Next，have more talk with your teachers，parents and classmates to get a calm state of mind．Last but not least，listen to some peaceful music when you feel worried．（高分句型二）The beautiful music can make you relaxed．I think what you do in your daily life has a great impact on your success．（高分句型三）
Best wishes and stay healthy．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，根据提示信息最近，你在网上看到了你的英国好友Mike给你发来的帖子，诉说自己在考试前总是感到很紧张，身心健康也受到了影响，为此很苦恼．请你给他回帖，提出一些建议．写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确几个要点：心态良好，睡眠充足；均衡饮食，积极运动；其它建议（至少两条）．2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：As is well-known to all众所周知；Therefore因此；Firstly首先；Secondly其次；Thirdly第三；keep a balanced diet保持平衡膳食；Last but not least最后同样最重要的；have a great impact on对…有影响；
Firstly，make it a rule to go to bed early and get up early to get enough sleep．（高分句型一）
Next，have more talk with your teachers，parents and classmates to get a calm state of mind．Last but not least，listen to some peaceful music when you feel worried．（高分句型二）
I think what you do in your daily life has a great impact on your success．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Mike，
      As is well-known to all，physical and mental health is of great significance to success in exams．Therefore，I'd like to offer you some practical tips on it．
      Firstly，make it a rule to go to bed early and get up early to get enough sleep．（高分句型一）Secondly，keep a balanced diet and not eat junk food．Thirdly，take more exercise to keep fit．Taking exercise can also make you full of energy．Next，have more talk with your teachers，parents and classmates to get a calm state of mind．Last but not least，listen to some peaceful music when you feel worried．（高分句型二）The beautiful music can make you relaxed．I think what you do in your daily life has a great impact on your success．（高分句型三）
      Best wishes and stay healthy．
                                                                                                                                                                                                      Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                      Li Hua

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．