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【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（/\），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1、每处错误及其修改仅限一词；

2、只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不记分。

My experience at the begin of my high school life has taught me a good lesson. During that period, it never occurred to me that I was going to be or what kind of life I’d like to live. I always waste my time chatting online and play computer games. It was my poor grades in the mid-term exams and my head teacher’s inspiration that made me realized the importance of set a goal. From then on, I made my mind to get admitted into a famous university and devote me to some research work. Guided by my dream, I found myself making a great progress.

As a famous man once said, “ Living without an aim is like sailing without compass”. Only if we have certain goals in mind and stick on them can we make a difference and achieve success.

Answer 1

【答案】1.begin- beginning

2、to me that- to me what

3、waste- wasted

4、and play- and playing

5、realized- realize

6、set a goal- setting a goal

7、made my mind- made up my mind

8、devote me- devote myself

9、making a great progress-去掉a

10、stick on them- stick to them

【解析】第一处：考察名词，根据句意:最初的高中生活经历教给我重要的一课。 “最初”at the beginning of，是固定短语，故begin- beginning.

第二处：考察关系词，我在那段时期不知道自己会成为什么样的人，it never occurred to me我没有想到， it 作形式主语，主语从句中be动词缺少表语，成为什么样的人。用what来引导。故填that改为 what.

第三处：考察动词时态，本段是回忆高中时期，用一般过去时。故waste改为wasted .

第四处：考察非谓语动词，我以前总是浪费时间网上聊天并且玩电脑游戏，waste time doing，聊天和玩都做浪费的宾语。故play改为 playing.

第五处：考察动词搭配，根据句意：考试的低分和班主任的激励使我意识到设定目标的重要性，make somebody do，故realized改为 realize .

第六处：考察动名词，设定目标的重要性。介词of后面加doing结构，故set 改为setting.

第七处：考察介词，我下定决心要考入名牌大学并且致力于研究工作。“下定决心做”make up 哦哪上mind。故made后面加up.

第八处：考察代词，我下定决心要考入名牌大学并且致力于研究工作。致力于devote oneself to something, me-改为myself .

第九处：考察冠词，有梦想的指引，我发现自己取得了巨大进步。make progress “取得进步”进步是不可数名词。故去掉a.

第十处：考察介词，根据句意：只有头脑中有特定的目标并坚持这个目标，我们才能有变化获得成功。考察固定搭配“坚持”stick to…，故on改为to .