Question

假设你是学生李华，英国学生Peter去年来你校学习，一年学习期满准备新年前回

国。请你代表全班同学写一篇欢送辞，内容包括：

1.同学关系融洽；

2.英语学习氛围更浓；

3.保持联系，欢迎再来。

注意：1.词数100左右。（不包括已给出的首句词数）

2.文章应包括所有要点。

Dear friends,

Today we are having a farewell party to honor our friend Peter.______________________________________________________________________________

______________________________________________________

Li Hua

 

Answer 1

【答案】

不唯一

Possible version:

Dear friends,

Today we are having a farewell party to honor our friend Peter. He is going back to his homeland before the New Year. In the past year Peter and all of us have been on good terms. Also we have helped each other and become good friends. Thank you Peter for being a part of this class! We have a better atmosphere of English learning so we have become more interested in English and have made great progress. We really appreciate your help and friendship.

Dear Peter, we will miss you and we all hope that we can keep in touch. Expecting you to come back some day. Good luck, Peter. May you have a pleasant journey home!

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇欢送辞，所以要用第一人称来写。需要些的内容已经给出，但是写作时不要仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译，而是要添加些内容，使文章看起来更充实。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，一定要契合给出的开头，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。同时注意要求的字数100左右，不要太多也不要太少。

考点：欢送辞类作文

点评：本文属于欢送辞类作文，动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。