Question

【题目】假定你是李华， 你的英国朋友Peter来信向你咨询如何才能学好中文，请你根据以下要点给他写封回信。字数：120 左右。

1．参加中文学习班;

2. 看中文书刊、电视;

3. 学唱中文歌曲;

4. 交中国朋友。

．．．．．．

Dear Peter,

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Peter,

I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well. Here are my suggestions.

First, it is important to take a Chinese course, where you’ll be able to learn from the teacher and practice with your fellow students. Then, it also helps to watch TV and read books, newspapers and magazines in Chinese whenever possible. Besides, it should be a good idea to learn and sing Chinese songs, because by doing so you’ll learn and remember Chinese words more easily. Last but not least, you can also make some Chinese friends who can tell you a lot about China and help you learn Chinese.

Hopefully you will find these suggestions useful to you. Try and write me in Chinese next time.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：本次作文为提纲作文，体裁为书信。其主要内容为学好汉语的建议：1．参加中文学习班;

2. 看中文书刊、电视; 3. 学唱中文歌曲; 4. 交中国朋友。题文要求明确，但要注意表达的条理性。此外，该文的基本时态应为一般现在时。

【亮点说明】本篇范文文采用三段式，结构合理、主次分明。第二段为主体段落，例举了学好汉语的建议。其中First, Then, Besides, Last but not least的使用增强了文章的条理性。此外，句式的多变也是文章的一大亮点。如非限制性定语从句：…, where you’ll be able to learn from the teacher and practice with your fellow students；you can also make some Chinese friends who can tell you a lot about China and help you learn Chinese形式主语：it is important to take a Chinese course；it also helps to watch TV and read books, newspapers and magazines in Chinese；it should be a good idea to learn and sing Chinese songs 状语从句的省略：whenever possible④find的复合结构：find these suggestions useful.总之，文章出色地完成了写作任务，是篇考场上的佳作。