Question

【题目】书面表达

近来，不少大学新生在入学体检中诊断出（be diagnosed with）患有高血压（high blood pressure,），高血脂（high blood fat）等老年病。请针对这一现象谈谈你对高中学生就如何保持身体健康提出你的看法及建议。

保持健康的重要性。

保持健康的方法：多吃水果蔬菜，保持饮食平衡，避免吃含糖量高、脂肪含量高的食物。多锻炼，强身健体，减轻工作压力。改掉不良习惯。

注意：词数不少于100。

Answer 1

【答案】

When new college students are having physical examinations ,many of them are diagnosed with high blood fat and high blood pressure that are commonly found among old people. This has aroused considerable public concern.

As we all know, health is far more important than wealth。Good health enables us to enjoy our life and achieve what we hope for in our career. On the contrary, poor health leads to nothing. Since health is so important, how to keep good health?

Firstly, it is very important for us to take more fruits and vegetables because they provide vitamins, and we have to keep a balanced diet. So we should avoid eating food with lots of sugar and fat. Secondly, we’d better exercise every day to make our bodies strong. Besides, we have to avoid too much work pressure. Finally, we have to get rid of those bad habits that damage our health, such as drinking and smoking. In conclusion, if we stick to the advice given above and keep a good mood, we will have good health.

【解析】

试题分析：本文属于提纲类作文。此类作文在构思上没有挑战，重要的是遣词造句以及合适的过渡句及连接词的选用。本文要点已给出：1. 近来，不少大学新生在入学体检中诊断出（be diagnosed with）患有高血压（high blood pressure,），高血脂（high blood fat）等老年病。2. 保持健康的重要性：好的身体才可以保证我们享受生活实现目标。3. 保持健康的方法：多吃水果蔬菜，保持饮食平衡，避免吃含糖量高、脂肪含量高的食物。多锻炼，强身健体，减轻工作压力。改掉不良习惯。

所以文章分为三段，第一段介绍学生体检结果。第二段叙述保持健康的重要性。第三段重点描述保持健康的方法。