Question

1．假如你是红星中学学生李华．最近你代表你班参加了学校的汉字听写大赛（ Chinese Character Dictation Competition）．请根据下面四幅图写一篇英文日记．词数不少于60．

Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇日记，属于记叙文写作，写作时以第一人称和一般过去时为主，写作要点包括比赛前的准备，比赛的表现与结果，比赛后的心理感受．
重点词汇：announce（宣布）； hope to do（希望做某事）；volunteere to do（自愿做某事）；approach（接近）；more and more（越来越…）；got stuck （卡住）；win the first prize（取得第一名）； flashed into my mind（在我的头脑中闪现）；belonge to （属于）．
高分句型：1．Last week our teacher announced that a Chinese Character Dictation Competition would be held in the Auditorium on April 3．
                 that引导一个宾语从句，从句中主语 a Chinese Character Dictation Competition 和动词held是被动关系，故宾语从句用了被动语态．
                 2．In the following days，I busied myself preparing for the competition．
                  这里busy用作动词，busy sb （in） doing 意为"使某人忙于做某事"．
                3．As the competition was approaching，I felt more and more confident．
                 as引导一个时间状语从句；more and more confident意为"越来越自信"．
                4．Some characters were①so challenging ①that many of the competitors got stuck ②while I was able to write most of them down and won the first prize． 
                ①so…that…结构中that引导一个目的状语从句；②while作为并列连词在这里表示前后意义上的转折．

解答 April 10，2016  Sunday                       Cloudy
Last week our teacher announced that a Chinese Character Dictation Competition would be held in the Auditorium on April 3（高分句型一）．Many of us were interested and hoped to participate，but only one competitor was allowed to each class．Luckily I got the chance．
In the following days，I busied myself preparing for the competition（高分句型二）．My classmates all volunteered to help．Some of them dictated to me various characters they found in the dictionary while others offered to check my answers（积极准备比赛）．As the competition was approaching，I felt more and more confident（高分句型三）．The day finally came．Some characters were so challenging that many of the competitors got stuck while I was able to write most of them down and won the first prize（高分句型四）．（比赛的表现及结果）
When I was standing excitedly on the stage，pictures of my classmates helping and encouraging me flashed into my mind．The victory and honor belonged to all of us．（获奖后的个人感受）

点评 本文属于命题日记，首先要注意审题，明确文章要包含的要点，注意时态与人称，运用适当的词汇，句型以及语法规则，必要时运用一些高级词汇和句型增加文章的感染力．