Question

第二部分：书面表达 (共1题，12分)
假设你是本刊读者Jack，请你根据所给的背景材料给Peter写封回信。内容包括：
1.分析Peter父母不同意的理由；
2.你给Peter的具体建议。
背景材料：
Teenagers         总228（10/2009）期
编者按：本期刊登了Peter的来信，欢迎读者就信中谈到的问题进行分析并提出建议。
Editor,
I’m a boy of 18. I like arts, especially dancing. I want to attend a hip-hop（街舞） training course on the weekend, but my parents don’t permit me to. I’m very upset and need your advice.
Peter
注意：字数100左右。文章的开头已经给出，不计入总字数。
Peter,
You are very upset that your parents don’t permit you to attend a hip-hop training course on the weekend.                                                                             
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Yours,
Jack

Answer 1

One possible version：
Dear Peter,
You are very upset that your parents don’t permit you to attend a hip-hop training course on the weekend. I understand your situation. Maybe, your parents are worried that you will spend so much time on it that your study will be affected.
I suggest you have a good talk with your parents. You can also turn to your dance teacher for help. You should make your parents aware of the benefits of the training class. For example, the training will build up your body and make your mind relaxed. Good health and a sharp mind will certainly contribute to better study results in turn. What’s more, you can communicate with more people and learn a lot about society. Of course, you must promise that you will not spend too much time on it.
I’m sure your parents will agree with you in the end.
Yours,
Jack

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