Question

7．目前有部分髙中生与父母、老师缺乏必要的沟通，不能相互理解．请你针对这一现象，以"Mutual（相互的）Understanding"为题，写一篇100-120个词的英语短文．短文应包含 以下内容：
1．说明相互理解的重要性；
2．分析不能相互理解的原因；
3．提出解决这一问题的方法．
Mutual Understanding
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Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇议论文，要求考生就目前有部分髙中生与父母、老师缺乏必要的沟通，不能相互理解这一现象，以"Mutual（相互的）Understanding"为题，写一篇短文，写作要点包括：1．说明相互理解的重要性；2．分析不能相互理解的原因；3．提出解决这一问题的方法．时态以一般现在时为主．
重点词汇：undoubtedly （毫无疑问地）；play a  role （发挥作用）；pave the way for （为…铺平道路）；have an appetite for （爱好，喜欢）； too…to…（太…而不能…）；meanwhile（同时）；after all（毕竟，终究）；moreover（而且）；be essential to （对…必不可少）．
高分句型：1．As you know，where there is understanding，there is a way．
                  套用谚语"Where there is a will，there is a way（有志者事竟成）"的句型，增强文章的感染力．
                 2．In their eyes，their parents and teachers are too rigid to follow the trend．
                  句中运用短语too rigid to…充分说明了家长和老师与学生在观点上的差异．
                  3．Moreover，①it's essential to learn to be a little more tolerant．②Only so can they understand each other better．
                   ①it在句中作形式主语，真正的主语是不定式短语 to learn to be a little more tolerant；②副词only用在句首，句子用倒装．

解答 As you know，where there is understanding，there is a way（高分句型一）．Mutual understanding undoubtedly plays a key role in communication．It brings harmony，and even paves the way for integration into society．
However，some students often complain their parents and teachers hardly understand them．They have an appetite for fashions and excitements．In their eyes，their parents and teachers are too rigid to follow the trend（高分句型二）．Meanwhile，their parents and teachers，growing in a totally different tradition，have a negative opinion of their behavior．
Personally，both should acknowledge the gap between them．After all，everyone is unique in the world．Moreover，it's essential to learn to be a little more tolerant．Only so can they understand each other better（高分句型三）．

点评 提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否覆盖了所给要点．写作时注意准确运用时态，使得上下文意思连贯，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，使文章浅显易懂，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．