Question

【题目】本周是你校的“文化·艺术周”，周三你们有幸邀请到了在W大学任教的外籍老师Hudson教授给高一（8）班的学生上了一节英语课。假如你是校报School Weekly Express的记者，请以An Impressive English Lesson为题按下列提示用英语写一篇100~120词的新闻报道。

1．Hudson 教授上课的情况（语言简洁、幽默、易懂，帮助及时有效……）

2．学生们的表现（积极参与……）

3．学生们课后感想……

注意：报道的标题和开头已给出（不计词数）。

An Impressive English Lesson

On Wednesday of this Culture & Art Week, we

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Answer 1

【答案】

An Impressive English Lesson

On Wednesday of this Culture & Art Week we had the honor of inviting Prof．Hudson, a foreign teacher from W University, to give a class to the students of Class Eight, Grade One．His class left the students a deep impression．

Prof．Hudson had a free talk with the students in simple but humorous English．He spoke slowly and clearly so that students could follow him well．Meanwhile, he would repeat just in time what students did not understand．Greatly inspired, most of the students took an active part in his class．

After class, many students interviewed by us sang high praise for Prof．Hudson’s teaching．From his lesson, students came to the conclusion that it is not so difficult to learn English well if you talk more in English．

【解析】

试题分析:本文属于提纲类短文。主要介绍外籍老师Hudson教授给高一（8）班的学生上了一节英语课的情况。写作时要注意：不要仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译，而是要添加些内容，使文章看起来更充实，要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文，一定要谈谈自己的看法。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。

【亮点说明】范文行文有序、结构紧凑、要点全面、拓展合理。对于时态以及短语的运用恰当到位。特别是高级句式的运用十分精彩，如From his lesson, students came to the conclusion that it is not so difficult to learn English well if you talk more in English．中的同位语从句和状语从句的使用值得借鉴。