Question

14．请根据以下提示，并结合事例，用英语写一篇短文．
Four short words sum up what has lifted most successful individuals above the crowd：a little bit more．
注意：
①无须写标题；
②除诗歌外，文体不限；
③内容必须结合你生活中的一个事例；
④文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称；
⑤词数不少于120，如引用提示语不计入总词数．

Answer 1

分析 本文为议论文作文．
材料信息为一句话：Four short words sum up what has lifted most successful individuals above the crowd：a little bit more．
成功者的共性是：比他人多努力了一点
根据这句话，考生需讲出自己的体会．
写作主题可以为：坚持就是胜利
写作时需注意：内容必须结合你生活中的一个事例．
因此考生需结合自己的事例，写出切身的感受．

解答 One possible version
    On the path to success nothing can be more important than holding on a little bit more．Only if you hold out a little bit more，will success come along．That's how things go．
    An incident will never fade from my memory．One day，I had been puzzling over a math problem for long without any result．When I was on the point of giving up，it was my math teacher who encouraged me to go on．Following his advice，I kept thinking and trying．Eventually my efforts paid off．A solution flashed into my mind suddenly，from which case，I was astonished by the power of"striving a little bit more"．
    As someone puts it，"success means you did all that was expected of you and a little bit more"，which exactly illustrates the profound significance of staying longer．So hold out a little bit more，success is just around the corner．

点评 考生需根据所提供的信息提炼文章的写作主题，需了解写作要点及写作意图，仔细构思写作结构，平时注意积累词汇及语法知识．