Question

【题目】书面表达

建设和谐社会需要我们每一个人的努力，而对于我们中学生而言，最重要的就是要从身边的小事做起。就此，你班同学将在英语课上围绕“如何建设和谐校园”为主题进行一次讨论，请你准备一篇发言稿。主要从以下三个方面展开论述：

1.爱护学校设施；

2.尊敬老师，团结同学；

3.自觉保护校园环境。

注意：1.必须包括以上信息内容，可适当发挥，以使行文更加流畅；

2.开头、结尾均已给出。

3.词数100个左右。

注释：设施：facility

Dear fellow classmates,

I’m very glad to have a change here to share with you my views about “How to build a harmonious campus”.

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That’s all. Thank you for listening.

Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version:

Dear fellow classmates，

I’m very glad to have a chance here to share with you my views about “How to build a harmonious campus”．

As middle school students，I think it is our duty to work together to build a harmonious campus.How can we achieve this goal？First of all，I think our school is just like a big family.We should love our school and take care of the facilities on campus.Secondly，everyone should be friendly to each other.We should learn from each other，care for each other and help each other.We should have respect for our teachers.More importantly，all of us must be faithful and honest in our daily lives.Finally，we should work together to protect the natural environment around us by taking care of all the trees，flowers and the grass.

As for myself，I will study even harder and try my best to do all the above.Let’s start now and do what we can to build a harmonious campus!

That’s all.Thank you for listening.

【解析】

试题分析：本篇书面表达属于提纲作文，内容是就如何建设和谐校园为主题写一篇发言稿。写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确要点就是主要内容。2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象。要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写。本文写作时可以按照提示的3个方面的内容（1. 时间：2. 地点；3. 活动安排。）进行介绍。3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般现在时为主。4.注意通知格式。

【亮点说明】本文用first of all, secondly, finally的先后顺序使文章层次分明，结构紧凑，语言连贯。同时使用了多种句式和结构。比如宾语从句I think it is our duty to work together to build a harmonious campus.How can we achieve this goal，动词连用We should learn from each other，care for each other and help each other.等