Question

【题目】假定你是李华，你们班打算下周二举行班级音乐会，请你代表班级邀请你校外教 David 参加。内容包括：

1.时间：下周二下午2:00。

2.地点：校礼堂。

3.节目：各种乐器演奏,粤语歌曲,京剧等。

4.希望David老师也能表演一个节目，乐器或歌曲。

注意：1.词数100左右；

2.可以适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯；

3.称呼和落款已给出,不计入总词数；

4.礼堂 auditorium；粤语歌曲 Cantopop songs.

Dear David,

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Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear David,

On behalf of my class, I'm writing to invite you to our class concert, which will take place at 2:00 pm next Tuesday in our school’s auditorium.

During the concert, my classmates will perform various musical instruments such as the erhu, the guzheng as well as the violin. In addition, some of them will sing Cantopop songs, popular songs and Beijing Opera. As is well known, Beijing Opera is the most important part of Chinese culture, and the world intangible heritage. We’re sure this is going to be an interesting intercultural experience for you.

At the end of the concert you’re welcome to give us a performance if you wish. Playing a musical instrument or singing a song would be OK.

If you won’t be able to attend, please inform us in advance.

We’re really looking forward to seeing you.

Li Hua

【解析】试题分析：

本文书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封电子邮件。

第1步：根据提示可知，本篇是一篇电子邮件：假定你是李华，你们班打算下周二举行班级音乐会，请你代表班级邀请你校外教 David 参加。内容包括：1.时间：下周二下午2:00。2.地点：校礼堂。3.节目：各种乐器演奏,粤语歌曲,京剧等。4.希望David老师也能表演一个节目，乐器或歌曲。

第2步：根据写作要求确定关键词，如： auditorium（礼堂）； Cantopop songs.（

粤语歌曲）；perform various musical instruments（表演各种各样的乐器）；Beijing Opera（京剧）；As is well known,（众所周知）；an interesting intercultural experience（一次有趣的不同文化间的经历）；in advance（提前）等。

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态语态问题。

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。

本文内容完整，语言规范，鱼片连贯，词数适当。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。

【亮点说明】

本文是一篇电子邮件，格式正确，内容符合要求，文中使用高级词汇和句子。I'm writing to invite you to our class concert, which will take place at 2:00 pm next Tuesday in our school’s auditorium.句中which引导非限制性定语从句；As is well known, Beijing Opera is the most important part of Chinese culture, and the world intangible heritage.句中as引导非限制性定语从句；Playing a musical instrument or singing a song would be OK.动名词做主语；If you won’t be able to attend, please inform us in advance.条件句使用巧妙；另外，On behalf of代表，In addition另外，At the end of在---尽头，等的运用为文章增色添彩。